I, Brooks have been a
solider for 15 years and the battle against Persia has been the hardest battle
I have ever fought in. I thought we were headed home after the battle but
instead Alexander wants us to capture more land for his empire. Why is he not
satisfied with Persia? It is a huge piece of land. I want to see my family and
let them know I am okay.
I do not see why Alexander The Great is so
great. I have never met him. He has only bossed me around. He has made our military
much more successful though. He introduced new weapons such as the two handed
pike, which is what I use. It gives me an offensive and defensive advantage so
I can be more effective in battle. He also made us start to train for different
jobs. I am in a cavalry. There is also a heavy infantry, archers, skirmish
infantry, and light and heavy cavalry. This actually makes us more effective in
battle I believe we were better prepared for the battle against Persia than
lots of other battles we have fought.
Back in Alexandria a new kind of
culture has been blended and it is called Hellenistic culture. It is a blend of
Egyptian, Persian, and Indian culture. I
believe this culture was caused by Alexander not making people believe in one
culture. This was a smart move on his part because people with all cultures
feel like there culture is welcome in Alexandria. This culture also brought
many new ideas to Alexandria in science and technology. The museum is a huge
observatory in Alexandria were very smart people would study. Hellenistic
culture also influenced philosophy and art in a positive way. Much like its
effect on science and technology Hellenistic culture brought many smart
philosophers and artist to Alexandria. All of this made Alexander’s empire more
successful over all. Both Adolf Hitler and Alexander The Great were very
successful rulers. As soon as Hitler was appointed chancellor in 1933 he change
the government which was a Weimar Republic into the Third Reich which was a
single-party dictatorship based on the idea of Nazism. Alexander ensured his
reign by killing his rivals to the throne. Both Hitler and Alexander tried to
ensure their position of high power as soon or even before they were appointed
it. After ensuring their rule both of them wanted to expand the amount of land
they had control over. Hitler did this by expanding into Poland and Alexander
did this by capturing Persia. But both of them were not happy with what the had
captured and the wanted more land so they got more land by capturing more
surrounding countries and empires. Both rulers did not leave the people alone
in a area in which they had captured. They put them to work or killed them all.
Hitler’s plan was to either put them to work or if they were Jews to kill them.
Alexander’s plan was to make them fight in his army till they died fighting.
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I like your story and how you incorporated the weapons and strategies. Great job!
ReplyDeleteYour character, Brooks shares a similar point of view towards Alexander. They want to go home but they know that they can't. Everything is good except is that in the middle of the post you switched verb tenses.
ReplyDeleteI wish that you could have tried to expand your comparison of Alexander to someone who is not as known. If you would have chosen a person that contrasted Alexander more, it would have been much more compelling to read. I would have wanted to read how Alexander the Great, such a famous person, compared to someone in History who was not quite as known.
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